Zænym Mark

[zaenym]

[atrb=border,0,true][bg=212121] Welcome ★ ZÆNYM MARK, DO YOU KNOW THAT THERE'S A CHANCE IN YOU, THERE'S A SPARK IN YOU, YOU GOT TO IGNITE Personal ★ Information,

[/b][/color] Zænym Lucas Mark
★ AGE: Seventeen (17)
★ GENDER: Male
★ SEXUAL PREFERENCE: Heterosexual
★ HEIGHT: Five foot seven inches
★ WEIGHT: One hundred forty-seven pounds
★ JOB: None but he helps his mom with the rabbits for an allowance.
★ RACE: Lycanthrope
★ FACTION: Lupine Brotherhood
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Your ★ Beauty,

Appearance,

[/color] Zae's apparel would be defiantly interesting. Normally, in the beginning of the day, the boy would just wake up in blue jeans, a t-shirt, and shoes. The only reason why he would be in his clothes first thing in the morning at around five thirty in the morning would be to shovel the rabbit crap to put it into a bag. After that he would shower, and put nicer clothes. In his closet would be normal street clothing that typical teenagers would wear. Now guys wear skinny jeans, including him, but not all the time. He would wear a studded belt though it doesn't exactly matter what belt he uses. His upper body would be anything that had style to it. The only thing you would NEVER see him wear will be shorts, not even on hot days or any type of jersey for whatever team. He would be wearing a 4H uniform or a FFA uniform only if there is a contest or animal showing that he's participating in. That's for clothing.

As for body description, Zænym is healthy and fit but likes to go average with the rest of the people for what he is compare to humans. In human apparel, Zae is five foot seven, weighs normal. He is German so he’s white, not pale but when he's sick, his face you'll see how pale his face could get. That's due to the sickness that people sometimes get him. His hair gives him personality most of the time. His platinum blond hair with his natural black hair the way it's at right now. He has a lip piercing on his lower lip on his left side. On the wrist area, he has a tattoo of a full moon representing that he is a member of the Lupine Brotherhood. Zae's eyes are blue.

In animal form, Zænym is a black wolf with a little bit of white on his head due to the color of the hair that was bleached and dyed. He isn't a large wolf, but average compare to most of the lycanthropes. His tattoo of the full moon appears yellow on his black fur. His eyes are the same color as his human appearance.



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LIKES +

[/color] Rabbits (the animal and the meat)
★ Music
★ Chemistry (the class, you get to blow stuff up)
★ Bowling. (it's the one sport he could actually do).
★ Living away from the city
★ County Fairs
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DISLIKES -

[/color] Super loud deathmetal, scremo music
★ Homework(who does)
★ Sea food
★ Hot Summer days.
★ Drugs (the addictive and medical)
★ Animals that attacks his rabbits
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POSITIVE TRAITS +

[/color] Mulitasking-talents (he could be on his phone while working with the rabbits, skills!)
★ Gets things done
★ Usually in a good mood.
★ Street smart as well as book smart
★ Trustworthy
★ Listens
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NEGATIVE TRAITS -

[/color] A bit of a smartarsh
★ Sarcastic (some people apparently don't like that)
★ Lazy in cases
★ Soda addict
★ Childish. Maturity level might be low but will be serious when he has to.
★ Hypocritical in a lot of accounts
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OVERALL PERSONALITY

[/color] Zænym isn’t exactly the best friend you can have, but if you need one, he’s there. The type that if you feel sad, that is what he really likes about the Brotherhood, if you’re sad, you can go to any of them. He is very supportive but only for if it’s for the right thing. Yeah, Zae is a good kid, is responsible, not just helping his mom with the rabbits and after school or doing school work, if he needs to do something, he'll normally do it without questions but if he can't, he would say something in advance.

He’s a good person really, doesn’t believe that hurting people or creatures would be the most excellent way of doing things. Zænym is against violence but will fight for what he believes in or to defend a friend if he has to. The last thing he would want though would be to see his friend on the ground stained with blood while the persons who did it just stand there and laugh, he would fight back, not revenge, but for them to feel the same way, but that might be considered as revenge; it must depend on the person’s opinion. You might call it bravery but Zænym is just defending his friends about anything happening that is bad that someone caused, even if it was his parents. Really defending his friends and family but there are often difference cases that are known to the possibilities.

Creative is defiantly a factor when you see the boy. Sometimes when you see him in his room, he would be drawing, sketching ideas, or even making stuff to put on his wall how things happen. Not just in art, think of Zænym as Tom Sawyer if you must, actually, it isn't creative much because he does it by the books but it's really creative of how he does things.


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Background ★ Info,

History,

[/color]Zænym was born in New York City the day after his parents, Ellen and Wolfgang Mark emigrated from Germany. His parents both didn't like the country that they were born in because of its history and what's better to hide their German Pride than to move out of the country? The day Zae was born was March 27, 1993.

After his parents finished all of the papers, they moved into an average size apartment in Saint Calais. An average-sized apartment would be two bedrooms, one bathroom, and a family room which includes a kitchen within the four walls. Wolfgang, he had a degree in Forensic Science but since Saint Calais isn't a big city, he works in Rochester, in a lab that helps the police with crimes to see who did it and all.

Ellen Wells, she has a degree in animal science but didn't know what to do till Zænym asked her if he could be in 4H when he was eight. After that, they bought a home out in the country, it didn't have the most land but it had about ten acres of farm land. His mother raised rabbits as a breeding project and for FFAers, 4-Hers like Zænym to have a market project for the county fair. Californians and New Zealand’s to be specific in breeds. After a couple of years into her work, she had enough money to pay someone to build a building for the rabbits with hanging cages. It made things a lot easier for her.

Things became a lot calmer through the years till it happened. It was the summer of the year 2007. It was in the middle of the night, full moon, there were noises in the rabbit barn, and his mother told him to grab a gun and a flashlight to check if it was a raccoon or a fox wanting to mess with the rabbits like last month. Zænym got outside in blue jeans and a t-shirt with his shot gun and started to search the rabbit barn. Zae was thirteen so he knew well enough to aim and shoot. The only thing that was paw prints, larger than a normal fox. He followed the tracks for about two minutes till something came up from behind. Only one shot was fired, but no blood was spilled except his own, blood spilled from the neck where the large dog bit him.. His mother ran after where he fired his gun, and quickly as she could took him to the nearest hospital.

The next day felt normal, except the fact that he had IVs in his arms and pain in his neck. The people at the hospital told him what happened, got attacked by a large dog (wolf) but it didn't have rabies so one less shot for the boy. Zænym was out of the hospital two days later because the doctors wanted to double check on everything to make sure everything was correct and nothing else was a problem.

Which also ment he was back helping his mom with the rabbits, which ment shoveling the rabbit crap and checking if they have food and water. Zænym always done this, always in the morning at around five o'clock in the morning, showers, and went to school when he had school. Then during breaks, he doesn't do much stuff, he would go to his friend's place and actually do something fun like, video games, go to the movies, walk around town, sometimes shop depending on the mood and the day, like when school is about to start or whatever the case is.

The first time that Zae had reactions of what he was when he was at his mall with his girlfriend (at the time). They were at the food court, he was carrying a tray of food that they ordered and dropped it, didn't know what happened but made the excuse that he didn't grasp it hard enough. Got more food because the place where they got the food saw what happened but saw someone else bumping into him, though that didn't happen. That was Zænym being week before the full moon. Him with his senses happened when he woke up from the hospital when he was able to smell almost everything and when he walked past a perfume shop, it made him dizzy enough to walk into an elderly lady.

Shortly after a full moon night, he figured out what he was, didn't take it nicely because of the pain just by the shifting into a wolf was bad enough. Zænym didn't want to tell his parents what he was, didn't want them to panic so he kept it a secret till he was a freshman in high school. A couple of people about a year or two, or sometimes people the same age he was asked him if he needed help. Though at the time, Zænym had good grades, which were the only thoughts was going through his mind. The one time in his Geometry class, a kid asked him if he needed help with the homework that was assigned and said yes because he didn’t understand the teacher was lecturing about tangent lines. The other student told him to meet at the park straight after school. And so he did, from there the person really wanted to help Zænym to learn what he was through them. Joined the Brotherhood, the only thing that he was a bit curious was about the tattoo but he didn’t even know that his parents got tattoos so they didn’t mind him having one. Now Zænym is a junior in high school.

★Circumstances of Transformation/Discovery: -- In history
★Circumstances of Faction Initiation: -- In history
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The ★ Puppeteer,

[/b][/color] Not at this moment
★ WHAT SHOULD WE CALL YOU? Zænym or Zae
★ HOW TO CONTACT YOU? Myspace (omg i still use it I know!), Gaiaonline, MSN, Eletronic Mail (e-mail) and PMl
★ HOW DID YOU FIND US? Advertisment
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FACE CLAIM

[color=e10e3f]★[/color] [b]STRIFY, JACK[/b], [s] Zænym Lucas Mark[/s]

The ★ Copyright,

Rosen Nocturne Kai & Kiare.♥

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[Kai ♪]

PENDING ♠,

Hello Zaenym; sorry for the delay. It's been a hectic past few days.

Anywho, almost everything looks fine here, but since we're cracking down on standards, we're going to have to ask you to take another look at your spelling and grammar issues. There's a lot of badly fragmented sentences floating around as well as some incorrect usage; once or twice is acceptable but it's pretty frequent here.

On that same thread, it would also be nice (but not required) if you could make your capitalization (or lack thereof) in the one word/one line bullet points be consistent (pick capitalization or no capitalization).

Just reply here when you've corrected these things and we'll take another look. Thanks.

[zaenym]

OK, I checked on word and this is the best I can do and apparently I couldn't make up my mind on capitalization and recapitalization. Yeah, I never said that I'm an A+ English student but I'll do my best in RPing.

[Kai ♪]

ACCEPTED ♠,

Thanks for the quick edits though I've noticed you confuse defiantly with definitely a lot and now Zaenym's approved. Have fun threading him around.